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Hey guys, I know I've been awful quiet lately..
But I've got a question for any of you that write and read (basically everyone)!
Soo I've got this story.. And I can't tell what its about,
but basically there is a female main character, and a supporting male character that saves her life in the beginning..
He is super proud and is basically looking for the perfect "trophy wife". Seeing as she is pretty swell in his eyes, he makes her feel obligated to marry him since he saved her life.

My question is, what do you think is the best way to get rid of him?
I know it sounds weird, but see, I've got this /other/ character I want her to get together a few books later (yeah.. its a series).
And obviously I can't have my main getting married to a proud jerk ;).
So, with that being said, I am not /changing/ him to be nice, I need a way to push him away from my main without her actually telling him to buzz off.
It is set in a dangerous place with plenty of horrible creatures to eat him, there are other women that could come and snatch him up, a government that could offer him a chance to help out with research or something, opportunities for him to (literally) take a bullet for her, a handsome stud that could tell him "she's mine", or even the fact that in the end of the book, she will have to leave the place they all live.

So my question is, as a reader of this book, or a writer yourself,
What would you most approve of?
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Piper Epicosity
Artist | Student | Traditional Art
United States
Hi there! I have a name, but you can call me Piper :3

I enjoy drawing in my free time as well as reading, playing volleyball and video games. I also own a Miniature Pinscher named Essie, which you might see a drawing here and there of her little sweetness :D. I look at Deviantart as a way to get my work out there and see what people think of it, I also very much enjoy seeing other peoples work (it always amazes me what others come up with!). I always find constructive criticism helpful, although I do deeply appreciate (honest) compliments :3 . I look forward to hopefully getting to know as many people as I can on here.

*IF YOU HAVE AN ACCOUNT ON DOINK:* Hey guys, its Dawnbeforedusk! I would LOVE it if you would please send me a message so that I can find all of you guys on here!

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Sketch-Zap Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
HAPPY BIRTHDAY
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MsEpicosity Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Awh, thanks bro :)
I thought I had been all but forgotten on here..haha I should probably post stuffs..
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Sketch-Zap Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Same. But if you're busy living, don't deter your living to go online. 
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ChampagnePain Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Happy birthday! :iconcaekplz:
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MsEpicosity Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you :3
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KVAStudios Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012

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Vickygent Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2012
thanks for the :+fav:
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Charil Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Thank you kindly for the watch! And (belated) welcome to Deviantart! I hope you like it here :)
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MsEpicosity Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
You are very welcome :3 I read through your comic and enjoyed it very much! I look forward to seeing what you post next! Thanks :D and yes, I already am really liking it here.
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Charil Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Thank you for saying so! :)
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